03-04-2016, 12:35 PM
Much better now! : - )
Some further suggestions: the wheels... it would add a lot to the quality of the scenes if they give the impression of being immersed in the surface (in a surface with sand maybe). Their touch on the surface looks artificial, somehow. And also, it seems that the use of more curvy surfaces on the vehicles would add a lot to their look... they are too sharp edged. Finally, a more dramatic camera use... it will add a lot to the whole look of the scenes.
Some further suggestions: the wheels... it would add a lot to the quality of the scenes if they give the impression of being immersed in the surface (in a surface with sand maybe). Their touch on the surface looks artificial, somehow. And also, it seems that the use of more curvy surfaces on the vehicles would add a lot to their look... they are too sharp edged. Finally, a more dramatic camera use... it will add a lot to the whole look of the scenes.